Planning my Redrafts

Our teacher came round and told us what she thought of our task overall. She mentioned that the contents page looked a bit confusing meaning that i should make the page numbers stand out, maybe by making the writing bigger or bolder. She then came onto my picture and front page, she mentioned that the editing was good however she said that overall my front page didn't look like a magazine mainly because the masthead was at the bottom and not the top she also said that my front page needs to get more busy like the contents. What i am planning to do is use one of the pictures i considered so i am able to place more writing on the front page, i will then place my masthead on the top of the page rather then the bottom. On the front page i am keeping the images i took from the ski trip because it represents what has gone on around the school however the page names and numbers i will make a different font so it stands out from the definition.